From Mrs. Simons' notebook
"Gray recedes to light-the loon's echo beckons..."
Please take the time to read and enjoy others' writing. Positive comments only.
Please respond to the week's topic by Monday. Happy blogging!
We have spent a lot of time writing and rewriting (and rewriting!) this year, always looking for the gems hidden in our words. Just like a miner sifting through thousands of pounds of dirt, look back through your notebooks and writing pieces, sifting through, looking for the hidden gems. For this week's blog, share your favorite line from your body of writing created during this 7th grade year.
From Mrs. Simons' notebook "Gray recedes to light-the loon's echo beckons..." Please take the time to read and enjoy others' writing. Positive comments only.
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Stephen Oliva
5/17/2016 10:30:11 am
My favorite line from my writer's notebook is from my poem called My Family and the line is. "I am the one who has fallen and somehow have gotten back up."
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Sydney Linkiewicz
5/19/2016 10:27:50 am
My favorite line from my writer's notebook is "It all depends on what God has chosen for each of us, no matter how big or how small, he loves us all equally, but, you should always remember that you are safe, inside of yourself."
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Aidan N
5/19/2016 02:32:00 pm
Sentence is from one of my poems Dyslexia. " I learned how to conquer it like greece winning the Trojan War."
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Khani C.
5/19/2016 07:24:46 pm
My favorite line from my writers notebook is from my manifesto "Use your power wisely".
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Tyler
5/20/2016 08:28:30 am
Poem about bravery- "Bravery is purposefully taking the harder, but more important way out."
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Dom
5/23/2016 09:10:20 am
this is very true
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Aaron Cohen
5/20/2016 09:33:48 am
My favorite writing piece is either Surviving in the Time of the Dinosaurs or Surviving in the Time of the Dinosaurs 2. Also just want to state tis it would actually be very hard and rare for us to mine a diamond so were just mining gold.
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Alec McVearry
5/20/2016 02:26:20 pm
My favorite line from my writing is "Change can only be conquered by going with the flow".
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Thomas Allport
5/20/2016 06:08:39 pm
In one of my pieces "Trees Alone" I said "What happens when a tree is alone".
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Marcus
5/23/2016 08:51:11 am
I don't know what does happen when a tree is alone
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Nathan
5/21/2016 05:05:32 pm
One of my favorite things that I wrote this year was from my poem called Vacation. It takes place when I was in Puerto Rico. I said "I saw the vast ocean, the water was bright turquoise like the gem, It looked never ending.Like how I wanted the trip to be...Never ending." My other favorite thing that I wrote this year was in my peom called Rage. I said for my life lesson, "anger is not evil, it is the ugly shadow of good."
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Colin Bennett
5/22/2016 10:54:25 am
From my writing piece, "life lesson: Don't give up and keep going."
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Marcus
5/23/2016 08:50:41 am
This is a great life lesson
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Noah Marino
5/23/2016 08:54:28 am
This is a great life lesson Colin.
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Grace D.
5/22/2016 11:15:34 am
One of my favorite lines in my writing pieces is, "But when I tell my parents, all they say is that it was the trees dancing in the night’s cool breeze." This is from my poem called I for I Know.
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Xavier Plourde
5/22/2016 11:44:42 am
I think that the most important line from one of my stories is:
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jackson thomas
5/22/2016 01:09:35 pm
My favorite line from writing this year is " Earth a speck in the universe among a sea of stars."
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David
5/23/2016 09:09:22 am
Good job jackson
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Khani Cossa
5/23/2016 08:41:03 pm
Nice
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Douglass Welsh
5/22/2016 03:13:45 pm
My favorite line from my poem cars is "Cars cars red and blue Honda, Toyota, and Subaru too."
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Gabe
5/22/2016 04:53:03 pm
My favorite line is from That Smooth Groove one of my poems. "You bop up and down to that groove,
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Madi Ancone
5/22/2016 08:30:06 pm
My favorite line from my writing is "we should all treat people equally, for we are all human and we all have feelings. We can all be hurt by some bodies words."
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Julian G.
5/22/2016 09:02:53 pm
My favorite line was from a poem called #DaAcrostic, which I wrote this year. It spelled my name J-U-L-I-A-N. For J, it said "Jesus Christ is his risen savior, helping him though tough days." This is definitely on of my hidden gems that helps me every day.
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Tarek
5/23/2016 08:09:52 am
My favorite line from one of my independent writing pieces is, "Where is it? I thought I put it on the sofa, no, in the drier, no in the sink. Wait what?" This is when I'm trying to find my lost soccer in my poem, "Soccer Bag Poem."
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Jacob Marshall
5/23/2016 08:19:48 am
"Losing to the Pens Like what the heck"
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Marcus
5/23/2016 08:50:19 am
This is a great quote
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Teddy Westfall
5/23/2016 08:21:05 am
My favorite line in my writer's notebook is from a poem called Care For A Game? and it's "Try your best to win the game called life, or you might not see the end"
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Johnny
5/23/2016 08:23:55 am
My favorite line from my writing this year is, "Brown is the person that is standing there with a blank face, like a confused dog, the boring one."
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Marcus Payne
5/23/2016 08:49:55 am
My favorite line is from my poem Forgive Me I Meant To Do It. The line is "if I had the chance I'd do it again.
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Skyler
5/23/2016 08:52:18 am
So dear boy,
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Francesca Chirco
5/23/2016 08:53:19 am
My favorite line is " I am hidden by clouds sometimes."
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Noah Marino
5/23/2016 08:53:29 am
My favorite line is "Green is like a freshly cut christmas tree."
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David Stewart
5/23/2016 08:58:54 am
"But it was the greatest of times" ~David
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Dominick
5/23/2016 09:07:18 am
"On yellow days i'm bright like a bonfire at night."
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Ryanne
5/23/2016 12:53:46 pm
My favorite line from my writing is from my manifesto, " Get lost. Find yourself."
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Andi Hunt
5/23/2016 03:19:34 pm
One of my my favorite lines is from one of my poems called "The Rainbow Days." My favorite line from that poem is "On green days I am jubilant and excited, like the sound of nature awakening from a long, harsh winter."
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Ryan Collins
5/25/2016 09:15:14 am
"The First Time The Golden Sun Rose"
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Sundus Abdel-Aziz
5/25/2016 11:08:28 am
One of my favorite line from my manifesto is, "Do what you love and do it often."
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Will Quackenbush
5/27/2016 01:17:51 pm
My favorite line is from my writing is, Life lesson: Be a leader.
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Keeley Riley
6/2/2016 09:23:25 am
My favorite piece is L is for Love Sucks
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Kayla Green
6/3/2016 12:02:00 pm
I wrote another poem about dance and my favorite line is, "We will dance forever and always put up a fight."
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Gunther Schnorr
6/6/2016 08:57:52 am
My favorite line is what happens to a dog without a home.
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ethan kesselring
6/6/2016 08:59:04 am
My favorite writing peice is L is for Lacrosse.
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Jonathan
6/6/2016 01:08:15 pm
My favorite writing piece is Illiterate.
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